Task 2counts double.
Task 1 is a camera: describe, do not preach. Task 2 is an argument: one position, held throughout, finished. Under-length answers lose marks; memorised answers score zero. Band 7 is not bigger words. It is a clear overview, a clear position, and sentences without errors.
The report.
The letter.
Academic · the report
Four paragraphs, always. One sentence that paraphrases what the chart shows. One overview paragraph: the big shape, two or three main trends or differences, no numbers needed. Then two detail paragraphs that group the data and quote the key figures.
The overview is the paragraph that separates Band 5 from Band 7. The descriptor for 7 says "presents a clear overview of main trends, differences or stages"; for 5 it says "recounts detail mechanically with no clear overview". Listing every year like a robot is the Band 5 pattern.
Language that earns marks: rose sharply, fell gradually, peaked at, remained stable, accounted for, overtook, roughly doubled, the highest proportion. Group, compare, never give an opinion.
Maps: before and after, location language (to the north of, adjacent to, was replaced by). Processes: stages in order, passive voice (the mixture is heated, the paper is then pressed).
General Training · the letter
Three bullets, three paragraphs. Every bullet in the prompt must be covered; a missed bullet is a missed task. Open with the purpose in the first sentence. Close with the action you want or the next step.
Tone is the mark. Band 7: "presents a clear purpose, with the tone consistent and appropriate". Band 5: "the tone may be variable and sometimes inappropriate". Decide before you write: formal (Dear Sir or Madam, Yours faithfully), semi-formal (Dear Mr Patel, Yours sincerely), informal (Hi Priya, Take care).
Common letter types: request, complaint, apology, enquiry, invitation, explanation to a landlord or a manager. Each has a stock opening and a stock close; learn six of each and never think about them again.
Read the question.
Answer that one.
01Opinion — "To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
02Discuss both views and give your opinion
03Advantages and disadvantages
04Problem and solution · cause and effect
05Two-part questions
What it
looks like.
Dear Mr Okafor,
I am writing about the heating in Flat 4B, which I moved into on the first of the month. Since the second week, the radiators in the bedroom and the living room have stopped working, although the one in the kitchen still runs.
As the evenings are already cold, the flat is uncomfortable to live in and I have been working from the kitchen table every day. I am also concerned that the damp patch under the bedroom window, which I mentioned when I signed the agreement, will get worse without any heat in that room.
I would be grateful if you could arrange for a heating engineer to inspect the system this week. If a repair is going to take longer, could you provide a portable heater in the meantime? I am available any weekday after 5 p.m. and all day on Saturday.
Thank you for your help with this.
Yours sincerely,
Anita Deshmukh
Whether students who move abroad should take paid work while studying is a decision most of them face within weeks of arriving. Both positions have merit, but I believe limited part-time work does more good than harm.
Those who argue for focusing only on the course point to the cost of failure. A student who fails a module because of night shifts loses far more than the wages earned, since tuition abroad is paid per year and a repeated term may also affect a visa. In demanding programmes such as engineering, the timetable itself leaves little room for anything else.
However, part-time work provides more than income. In Canada, for example, employers routinely ask for local experience, and a student who has worked even in a campus library arrives at graduation with references and a resume that reads as local. Work also forces daily use of English outside the classroom, which improves the fluency that examiners and interviewers reward.
In my view, the answer depends on the hours rather than the principle. Around fifteen hours a week, in a role connected to the field of study where possible, supports the degree instead of competing with it. Beyond that, the risks described above start to outweigh the benefits.
In conclusion, part-time work is worthwhile for international students provided the hours stay modest and the course remains the priority.